Martin Ortiz Guardado

  This is a screenshot of what my teacher helped me fix in my essay I also had students look over and give me feedback. The yellow highlighted words is where my teacher left a comment for me to fix.

  I had to create this I believe essay so I  started off by talking about how I would always get in trouble at school. I liked this project because it brought back old memories and allowed me to share it with my class. We also had to look over our classmate's essays and seeing how they put theirs together helped me with mine. This essay also helped me organize my past present and future and just better my understanding of how touse my HOC and LOCS. Ponte  L as  P il a s       Ponte las  pilas   is a famous saying in the Hispanic culture.  Ponte las piles  means you need to “put on your batteries” metaphorically speaking. This saying is used to tell someone to get their life together or to try their best. My mom was the first to say it to me when I was in middle school. I would never worry about my schoolwork. Because all I wanted was to have fun and hang out with my friends. I was the type of person to talk back to the teacher just ...