Martin Ortiz Guardado

This is one of my  invention works where I show how I brainstorm I did as part of my homework to help me out with my project 3 essay. I color-coded everything to help me visualize how I want my essay to be. This helped me with knowing when to put the opposing side of the argument and just make it more professional.   6+sorces-  at least  2000 words   Both sides            Opposing side My side   Intro- engage     Include  theses in the  intro   Introduce/ explain nuclear missiles   Summary of  opposing  view   Connect with the audience by agreeing to their  side!   Talk about Hiroshima and Nagasaki   Talk about the number of people the bombs killed   Counter with the number of American soldiers it saved and the war it ended   Then talk about the after effects caused by the  bomb.   Summary on my side   Talk abo...

   This is my project 3 polish draft. I tried my best to include some strong points on why nuclear weapons are a good tool to have. I also tried my best to come to an agreement with the opposing side and also included some of the bad things about nukes to try to give my readers the option to pick for themselves if they are with or agents' nukes.  Nuclear  Devastation:   B ad  I dea   On August 9th, 1944, the U.S. dropped a nuke on Nagasaki soon after Hiroshima was hit. The buildings were turned to dust; People were vaporized like in a cartoon leaving behind a dark silhouette. Some of the survivors had chemical-like burns all around their bodies almost as if they were mutated or melted. But the city itself was just a disaster, if I had to compare the way it looked to something, I would compare it to the zombie apocalypse. After the bombing, Pure terror struck the world leaving everybody scared and in shock seeing the effects of the new U.S. weapon at th...