Martin Ortiz Guardado

My name is Martin Ortiz Guardado And I'm an 18-year-old male who attends school at UAPTC as you may already know since your reading this. I'm currently trying to get a bachelor's degree in criminal justice. I plan on being a detective after I get my degree but first I have to start as a cop which I'm totally looking forward to. But meanwhile, I have a couple of hobbies That I like to do in my free time but lately, I haven't had any in weeks. When I do have some time for myself I go downtown to the ABC boxing gym and work out or spar with my friends. I also like playing video games because it helps me relax and escape this world for a bit. I use to work in construction before I started college but it wasn't going to work out with my new schedule so I had to find another job. I decided to go work at an Ihop in Little Rock because I thought it would be a fun experience and since some of my friends work there it's okay. I also bought a dream car a which is a 202...

This is some feedback that I got from my peers. I used this to help me with my polished draft. The feedback was awesome and as you can see pretty straightforward. My teacher created a discussion board where I also had to give feedback to my peers and we all just helped each other out.           

For project 1, I had to pick one poem and basically break it down. I picked the  The “Mother to Son” poem. This poem was written in free verse and written by Langston Hughes. I love how it's based on a mother giving her son advice based on her struggles.  This poem is very simple but tells us about her whole life and the time they're living in. (I didn't integrate my sources well and so I have to go back and make some changes.) Loving advice  from “ Mother to Son ”            This motivational and heart-warming poem “Mother to Son” by Langston Hughes ,   t his poem portrays the struggle ,  love ,   and  motivation of a mother to help  her son to keep going  through the  difficulties  of life .  Hughes creates a complex relationship between a mother and a son in order to de monstrate  a strong mother giving her son words of advice regarding life and its challenges.     ...