Project one feedback

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This is some feedback that I got from my peers. I used this to help me with my polished draft. The feedback was awesome and as you can see pretty straightforward. My teacher created a discussion board where I also had to give feedback to my peers and we all just helped each other out. 







 

 

 

 

 

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